I once saw a galaxy of grass knitting the mountain top,
strongly, steadily, expanding and claiming territories.
From there grew new suns, moons and fresh constellations.
They reminded me of you.
Your face and your smiles, I only vaguely remember,
But Dear, I need not see you to know you are here.
Your breath of galaxies intertwined with my white roses,
Your vibrating tides leaping high and far before my eyes,
Strongly, steadily, you engulfed rivers and thorny paths.
Now the sun has set and the rain has been tenderer,
the breeze at dawn has secrets to tell.
They're reminding me of you,
the one who took me back to Love.
Though it is said that, “There is no easy way from the earth to the stars (“Non est ad astra mollis e terris via”), where the journey begins in the heart, ones footing is sound and the trail glowing with reward, lovely like reflections on a river or the starlight in your eyes. Like the heart from which it flows, your poetry is beautiful and a wonderful read to begin the day. π₯° TY dear Annabel π·
You are most generous with your kind words, Phil! Thank you very much for this beautiful piece of comment!π»π₯
loved the saying β thereβs no easy way from earth to starsβ. I have been struggling of putting the right motif for my next choreography work. This seems to be an intriguing theme to explore! Thank you for the bonus, Phil! πππ·
You’re most welcome, dear Annabel ~ it’s my pleasure & I think that your poetic talent is outstanding! Ah, that does sound like an interesting aspect to consider, regarding your choreography…bonus! Have a great day, my friend πππ·
Your poetry was truly stunning to read, dear Annabel! The way you describe the world in your poems is so beautiful. How amazingly you write! Love itπππ
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Thank you, mic !π
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I could read this again and again and learn something new each time. Delightful writing, Annabel, and with your first line, I was hooked. π
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I am delighted to read your words, dear Michele! Beautiful and warm as always π thank you!π₯³π»
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Though it is said that, “There is no easy way from the earth to the stars (“Non est ad astra mollis e terris via”), where the journey begins in the heart, ones footing is sound and the trail glowing with reward, lovely like reflections on a river or the starlight in your eyes. Like the heart from which it flows, your poetry is beautiful and a wonderful read to begin the day. π₯° TY dear Annabel π·
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You are most generous with your kind words, Phil! Thank you very much for this beautiful piece of comment!π»π₯
loved the saying β thereβs no easy way from earth to starsβ. I have been struggling of putting the right motif for my next choreography work. This seems to be an intriguing theme to explore! Thank you for the bonus, Phil! πππ·
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You’re most welcome, dear Annabel ~ it’s my pleasure & I think that your poetic talent is outstanding! Ah, that does sound like an interesting aspect to consider, regarding your choreography…bonus! Have a great day, my friend πππ·
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I am gonna name it β from earth to starβ. Perfect! Thank you for the sharing and inspiration, Phil! π₯³π₯π and you too, have a fun week!
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Cool ~ TY Annabel ππ
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How sweet and gorgeous these moving words are! I love the imagery and careful emotion. β€
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So sweet are your words! Thank you, Jaya!ππ₯³
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You can’t go wrong with a good astronomy metaphor. Well done!
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Wow, thank you so much!π Glad to have you dropped by!
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What a beautiful words my dear Annabel! Your lyric expression is like breathing a fresh air.
Have a nice weekend my dear.
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Wow, thank you so much, Giannis! I am delighted by your visit!π₯³π
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Have a nice Sunday my dear. We thank you for your writing and emotions.
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You are very kind, Giannis! Have a joyful coming week!π»π₯³π·
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Thank you very much Annabel. I need your wiishes.
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Your poetry was truly stunning to read, dear Annabel! The way you describe the world in your poems is so beautiful. How amazingly you write! Love itπππ
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Lovely words
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Thank you for visiting!!
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This was so beautiful!
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Thank you so much for your kind words and visit! ππ»
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Youβre so welcome!
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